tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post7448554022937597236..comments2023-10-31T21:23:40.337+05:30Comments on Rhythm of words...: नहीं..!Parul kananihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11695549705449812626noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-46975389332245474062010-05-20T13:54:16.322+05:302010-05-20T13:54:16.322+05:30तुम बिछड़े तो क्या बिछड़े
फिर मैं खुद से भी मिला न...तुम बिछड़े तो क्या बिछड़े<br />फिर मैं खुद से भी मिला नहीं<br />क्यों तुमसे शिकवे रखता हूँ<br />और खुद से कोई गिला नहीं॥<br />सुन्दर एहसास हैं ...लाजवाबस्वातिhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06459978590118769827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-46238496913789990492010-05-19T17:05:07.105+05:302010-05-19T17:05:07.105+05:305-6 kavitayen paDhi aapki
yun to sabhi acchi hai...5-6 kavitayen paDhi aapki <br /><br />yun to sabhi acchi hai lekin is kavita mein kuch jyada hi kashish hai ,dard hai ,gahraaii hai ya yun kaho ki padhne vale ka man jaisa hota hai use vaisa hi bhaav jyada khiichta hai .निर्झर'नीरhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16846440327325263080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-68148953576281168662010-04-30T14:45:37.376+05:302010-04-30T14:45:37.376+05:30तुम बिछड़े तो क्या बिछड़े
फिर मैं खुद से भी मिला न...तुम बिछड़े तो क्या बिछड़े<br />फिर मैं खुद से भी मिला नहीं<br />क्यों तुमसे शिकवे रखता हूँ<br />और खुद से कोई गिला नहीं॥<br /><br />बहुत खूब !!!! <br />पढकर , दिल को सुकून मिला ||Shayar Ashok : Assistant manager (Central Bank)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14269190208303983206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-48273885506203171622010-04-30T05:23:35.313+05:302010-04-30T05:23:35.313+05:30wah....
sunder bhavabhivyakti...
sadhuwaad..wah....<br />sunder bhavabhivyakti...<br />sadhuwaad..योगेन्द्र मौदगिलhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14778289379036332242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-55533223838253177702010-04-30T00:22:19.883+05:302010-04-30T00:22:19.883+05:30parul
ek achhe nazmke liye mubarak baad
thoda a...parul<br /><br />ek achhe nazmke liye mubarak baad <br /><br />thoda antre ka teesre chauthe antare ka kafiya dekh len.....<br /><br />aapne kagiya mukhde me ila munnakit kiya hai fir aapne eela rakha hai jo jayaz nahee hai .......ek baar dekhen pleazKALAAM-E-CHAUHANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15878123206322332136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-7626654880593110122010-04-29T23:30:19.704+05:302010-04-29T23:30:19.704+05:30आधी रातें तुम ले गए
और आधी मैं ही कहीं रख भूला
जाग...आधी रातें तुम ले गए<br />और आधी मैं ही कहीं रख भूला<br />जागने की यूँ लत पड़ गयी फिर<br />कि उन ख्वाबों का कोई सिलसिला नहीं<br /><br />सुन्दर प्रस्तुति!!!विनोद कुमार पांडेयhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17755015886999311114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-17189566844478613082010-04-29T15:06:58.754+05:302010-04-29T15:06:58.754+05:30waah....bahut hi badhiyaawaah....bahut hi badhiyaaरश्मि प्रभा...https://www.blogger.com/profile/14755956306255938813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-44143578340882758492010-04-29T01:15:16.298+05:302010-04-29T01:15:16.298+05:30aaj kal thoda bzy rahta hoon naukri ki talaash mei...aaj kal thoda bzy rahta hoon naukri ki talaash mein..<br />to achhi rachnayein padhne mein der ho jaati hai....<br />bahut hi behtareen ...<br />padhkar achha laga...<br />-------------------------------------<br />mere blog par is baar<br />तुम कहाँ हो ? ? ?<br />jaroor aayein...<br />tippani ka intzaar rahega...<br />http://i555.blogspot.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-57410174341360346482010-04-28T22:56:35.468+05:302010-04-28T22:56:35.468+05:30बहुत सुन्दर भाव और अभिव्यक्ति के साथ आपने शानदार र...बहुत सुन्दर भाव और अभिव्यक्ति के साथ आपने शानदार रचना लिखा है! बहुत बढ़िया लगा!Urmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11444733179920713322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-73976359451917731122010-04-28T20:27:21.716+05:302010-04-28T20:27:21.716+05:30विरह वेदना का अच्छा चित्रणविरह वेदना का अच्छा चित्रणअजय कुमारhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15547441026727356931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-14538254874330110192010-04-28T11:52:06.182+05:302010-04-28T11:52:06.182+05:30Wonderful !!!Wonderful !!!nidhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17633461608459887107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-52787839842979219492010-04-27T20:56:18.632+05:302010-04-27T20:56:18.632+05:30very nice....i liked yhe last couplt especially.....very nice....i liked yhe last couplt especially..Saumyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03922889885887781227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-88654741912004981722010-04-27T20:52:35.407+05:302010-04-27T20:52:35.407+05:30तुम बिछड़े तो क्या बिछड़े
फिर मैं खुद से भी मिला न...तुम बिछड़े तो क्या बिछड़े<br />फिर मैं खुद से भी मिला नहीं<br />क्यों तुमसे शिकवे रखता हूँ<br />और खुद से कोई गिला नहीं॥<br /><br />सुन्दर शब्दों से सजी एक बेहतरीन रचना है!डॉ. रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री 'मयंक'https://www.blogger.com/profile/09313147050002054907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-18802862525022239582010-04-27T12:43:59.515+05:302010-04-27T12:43:59.515+05:30deepak ji aisa nahi hai ki main sirf 'gamjada&...deepak ji aisa nahi hai ki main sirf 'gamjada' rachnayen likhna chahti hoon..jab jo man mein aa jaye bas..likhti jati hu... :)baaki aapn ne apni baat rakhi..accha laga!aise hi sabhi ka sawagat hai!!<br />aur sabhi ka aabhar bhi :))))))))Parul kananihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11695549705449812626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-39778445727908852292010-04-27T11:16:03.921+05:302010-04-27T11:16:03.921+05:30ohhh !!!!
bahut hi khubsurat rachna....
hope aap y...ohhh !!!!<br />bahut hi khubsurat rachna....<br />hope aap yun hi likhti rahengi.....<br />regards<br />http://i555.blogspot.com/<br />idhar ka v rukh karein...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-2591666358140482302010-04-27T05:23:54.504+05:302010-04-27T05:23:54.504+05:30ise salaah nahin sirf ek nivedan ki tarah lena.ise salaah nahin sirf ek nivedan ki tarah lena.दीपक 'मशाल'https://www.blogger.com/profile/00942644736827727003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-54806192677332981282010-04-27T05:23:54.505+05:302010-04-27T05:23:54.505+05:30aur gum hi kyon khushiyon par bhi to likh hi sakte...aur gum hi kyon khushiyon par bhi to likh hi sakte hain na..दीपक 'मशाल'https://www.blogger.com/profile/00942644736827727003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-87411075302057545592010-04-27T05:23:13.193+05:302010-04-27T05:23:13.193+05:30Parul tum kafi achchha likhti ho lekin apni hi pic...Parul tum kafi achchha likhti ho lekin apni hi pichhli kai poston par jara gaur karo....<br />jyadatar 'main' ya prem ke oopar hain.. wo bhi prem ke sirf ek vishesh swaroop par kendrit.. is sab se bahar niklo<br />''aur bhi gum hain zamane(dahi jamane nahin) me mohabbat ke siwa.. chewing gum nahin :)''<br />hai na?दीपक 'मशाल'https://www.blogger.com/profile/00942644736827727003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-82985475553878310452010-04-26T22:35:08.828+05:302010-04-26T22:35:08.828+05:30bahut khoob ishq ka dard kambakht cheez hi aisi ha...bahut khoob ishq ka dard kambakht cheez hi aisi hai...दिलीपhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15304203780968402944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-88881228748225535552010-04-26T22:33:08.875+05:302010-04-26T22:33:08.875+05:30amazing words, great work of art!amazing words, great work of art!Vinayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08734830206267994994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-86292444780523168172010-04-26T21:15:13.899+05:302010-04-26T21:15:13.899+05:30kya baat hai !!wah..wah..blogs par samkaaleeno me ...kya baat hai !!wah..wah..blogs par samkaaleeno me sarvshrestha hone walee pratibha,gifted u rAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-31356448791359019962010-04-26T21:10:56.785+05:302010-04-26T21:10:56.785+05:30behtareen prastuti!
aapne prem ki bhavnaao ko acch...behtareen prastuti!<br />aapne prem ki bhavnaao ko acche dhang se avivaykt kiya hai.<br />regards-<br />#ROHITरोहितhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15505244446493519414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-10859665511270402722010-04-26T21:10:56.786+05:302010-04-26T21:10:56.786+05:30behtareen prastuti!
aapne prem ki bhavnaao ko acch...behtareen prastuti!<br />aapne prem ki bhavnaao ko acche dhang se avivaykt kiya hai.<br />regards-<br />#ROHITरोहितhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15505244446493519414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-22590799586916840242010-04-26T21:05:12.601+05:302010-04-26T21:05:12.601+05:30बहुत खूब .....!!
सारी पंक्तियों को आपने ले में बख...बहुत खूब .....!!<br /><br />सारी पंक्तियों को आपने ले में बखूबी पिरोया है .....!!<br /><br />भाव और शब्दों का चयन भी बेहतरीन हैं .....!!हरकीरत ' हीर'https://www.blogger.com/profile/09462263786489609976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3994877136740015507.post-70705418538796919692010-04-26T20:19:58.271+05:302010-04-26T20:19:58.271+05:30जी बहुत बढ़िया प्रस्तुति आपकी!भावनाओ को शब्दों खूब...जी बहुत बढ़िया प्रस्तुति आपकी!भावनाओ को शब्दों खूब पिरोया है आपने....<br /><br />कुंवर जी,kunwarji'shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03572872489845150206noreply@blogger.com